train yard(damn do i miss socom) open for critique - Tuner-Junction

loon · #1 (**permalink**) December 11th, 2006, 11:56 PM

here are some of my pics from the other day. only thing done to them in photoshop has been curves adjustments and adding a black overtone. open to critique, im always down to improve. just using a digital rebel, old school huge body, that i love. lens is off my eos rebel. wouldve had more but i had camera shake in the warehouse.

RoyMan · #2 (**permalink**) December 14th, 2006, 02:41 PM

nice!! i love urban decay/exploration photography!! the B&W's seem a bit dark to me, but im pretty sure its the monitor im using. outta curiosity, what the location of the place?

loon · #3 (**permalink**) December 14th, 2006, 02:54 PM

just some train yard in fargo, nd. its right across the street from my apartment. ill prolly bring my tripod back on a sunny day to see if i can remake some pics.

Tadashisan · #4 (**permalink**) December 18th, 2006, 07:38 PM

shot 1 - i like the contrast but the color saturation is a little much to me.

the black and whites are decent. maybe I've been shootin too much technicaly shit, but they lack anything interesting to my eye. and you may want to use unsharp mask to bring more sharpness in

for the love of god don't shoot pictures like this, they are bad. no offense but photographs like this irritate me because they aren't interesting.

the picture of the girl looking into the window is pretty cool, you should brig in a flash or dodge her using a layer mask or something because it's cool.

overall they are decent shots, but lack something really interesting, not baqd for an amatuer however.

loon · #5 (**permalink**) December 20th, 2006, 12:13 AM

hey bitch i didnt ask for you critism. i hate you. maybe i would be better if you threw some stuff my way. . . bitch.

ichiban! thanks. i dont really know how to work photoshop, teacher just taught us how to add tones and make things b and w. i hate using photoshop because it just reminds me that i suck at the photography ;_;